"The Seedling"

[flesheater]

Readily has inspired me to traverse the territory of dispicable degradation in sexuality. This is my "jot", as I call them, for my next story to work on. You'll get the gist of it and I think the depravity can be felt in these measely 100 words. I almost titled it "Insemination"...I thought that went a little TOO far.

I hope this makes your skin crawl ;D. Enjoy!

The Seedling
By Matthew A. Campbell

We couldn’t see what she saw. She said it was a disgusting, vile creature which inflicted the unholy and sacred perversion against her most intimate places. It impregnated her with a child, a creature; she could feel it slither within her, it ravaged her mind with vivid, sinister visions. We stood over her corpse; her abdomen was ripped from side to side, the scalpel lain within her cold grasp. We saw her womb hanging lifeless, devoid of the “child”. Everyone watched as bloodied, child-like hand prints crept across her dead flesh. The silence was deafening, we all believed her now.

[PaperGrace]

Ewwwwww!
;D

Don't forget, if you want to take this a bit out of PG13 comfort you can get an invite to the private blog. (PM Readilygrey)

On the other hand keeping it carefully written but still horrifying is a good exercise. Not being able to rely on the crutch of blunt language can be a good thing for sharpening our skills.

[flesheater]

Honestly; blunt, sort of distasteful language really bothers me about some fiction. I find myself wincing at vulgar language in stories. I realize it's a common thing now a day to swear or curse but I don't know, some stories are better with it left out.

[readilygrey]

Aug 28, 2012 14:22:12 GMT -5 flesheater said:

Honestly; blunt, sort of distasteful language really bothers me about some fiction. I find myself wincing at vulgar language in stories. I realize it's a common thing now a day to swear or curse but I don't know, some stories are better with it left out.

I feel the same way, which I always thought was odd because I like gruesome subject matter. I honestly think stories are less creepy if everything is spelled out, but it goes beyond that. I strongly dislike lowbrow, or body humor as well.

This drabble was definitely unsettling! My first thought was, "uh oh, I think we just went past PG13" but then I realized that the words or even the actions aren't obscene, it's just the feeling, ha ha. I really like the last line. Poor woman, they should have listened.

I think we need to work on the other blog and post stuff that might unsettle the random proboards moderator. The text of my pasta is probably over the line as well.

[flesheater]

Do we submit everything to you for the blog? The content of this full story probably won't make it on here then. I already started working on it...I'll let you read it first prior to posting here.