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Post by scribbliz on Aug 5, 2012 13:23:22 GMT -5
what books are those???
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Post by readilygrey on Aug 7, 2012 14:03:00 GMT -5
This sounds like a great topic for a new thread ;D
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Post by carrieon on Aug 13, 2012 16:18:13 GMT -5
Not a fan of fantasy/scifi, but this held my interest! The oddities of the aliens that you wove into the story are marvelous, and bring the reader into a totally new frame of reference. I think that's what made me want to read more. The situation is very funny. I think it would be most effective to have the note written in an alien script, so that it would constitute a major infraction. Perhaps the program the picture is running on has automatic translation? Anyway, this was amusing and imaginative. How did it do for your class?
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Post by readilygrey on Aug 13, 2012 19:27:01 GMT -5
Not a fan of fantasy/scifi, but this held my interest! The oddities of the aliens that you wove into the story are marvelous, and bring the reader into a totally new frame of reference. I think that's what made me want to read more. The situation is very funny. I think it would be most effective to have the note written in an alien script, so that it would constitute a major infraction. Perhaps the program the picture is running on has automatic translation? Anyway, this was amusing and imaginative. How did it do for your class? Thank you ;D I got 100 out of a 100 on it (yay!) I need to finish revising it. Thank you for the suggestions, a little tweaking and the story should be finished. No idea what I'm going to do with it though.
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